Hi Raff, Looks great. Just a couple of suggestions: "It is possible that certain textual structures may span multiple lines of verse, either by incorporating multiple verses, or by crossing the hierarchy of verse lines." Would "by incorporating multiple stanzas" be better? Or did you mean "lines"? "For these cases, it is recommended to fragment and reconstruct the elements representing the textual structures." This might be a personal thing, but I don't like "it is recommended to" + verb; it doesn't sound quite correct to me. Elsewhere in the Guidelines we use the formulation "it is recommended practice to...". "The following example from Margaret Cavendish's <title>Nature's Pictures</title> shows speech encoded across two verses..." Actually I think it shows speech encoded across two lines, doesn't it? "Alternatively, the elements may be reconstructed with stand-of markup via the element <gi>join</gi>" I think I'd prefer "using" instead of "via". Cheers, Martin On 15-03-27 02:14 PM, Raffaele Viglianti wrote:
Hi all,
I've drafted a new section for chapter 6 Verse, to address bug #705 [1]
The new section would come right after the section "Components of the Verse Line" [2]
Here is the draft: https://gist.github.com/raffazizzi/c70e1565bc4b83d4a043#file-vesa
Please let me know if you have any comments. If we're happy with it, I'd like to commit it before the freeze on Monday.
Thanks! Raff
[1] https://sourceforge.net/p/tei/bugs/705/ [2] http://www.tei-c.org/release/doc/tei-p5-doc/en/html/VE.html#VESE